I like the idea it is powerful
Reminds me of a quote
"the hit that doesnt kill u makes you stronger"
Maybe you were talking about a friend who liked controling everything and when u tried to talk your mind
He/she left u lost with no way to go back

That is the idea I get
Good write 5/5

I love this. i get the feeling you were in a relationship that tied you down but yet you were willing to be tied down for... but then they broke your heart and like you said "fell into one of life's cracks" for a while... but then you got over it, you felt free. 5/5