Announcement

by Thomas   Jun 2, 2012


People of the world
I have something to tell
No, it's not a political rant
Or an advertisement for something I sell

I want to talk about a very special girl
She is so smart, charming and graceful
Just the way she moves, dances and twirls
Makes my face look cheerful

She consumes my thoughts and mind
Makes me daydream even through the night
Makes me want to leave everyone and everything behind
She's my pink glasses and I just lost all my sight

My heart is pounding
Right out of my chest
Whenever I think of her
Really, it's astounding

How she makes me feel
But one thing needs to be said
One thing I should mention
We haven't even met

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  • 12 years ago

    by flaredhyz

    I love the ending. it makes me think hahha. I like this poem anyway

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    This is awesome! the twist at the end makes the whole poem! at first i was like yeah he's going to announce it at the end that he loves her... totally shocked me. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Thomas, this is one of the best love poems
    I have read in awhile. I did like the flow
    well rhyming not to mention the twist at
    the end
    excellent

  • 12 years ago

    by Max

    Nice ending Again !!
    love the twist in the end
    and I like you simple style alot
    for the poem lol
    It is pretty the idea is just fantastic xD
    5/5 keep writing =)

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Thomas i like this alot, these types of pieces can either be hammered out or flow out and this one flowed...really well...love the twist at the end ...you pull the reader right in with this one dude well done! 5/5

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