Mi Amore

by Cardwell   Jun 2, 2012


Oh Mi Amore,
I love you more
than the budding flowers in May!
Oh Mi Amore,
I Love you more,
than the songs I sing, or the words I say.

Oh! I want you to see,
I Love you more than I love me!
Oh! I want you to know,
I Love you more than words can show.

Oh please don't go!
I love you so!
And where your heart beats, so does mine.
Oh darling stay!
Don't go away!
For my Love won't die, not even by time.

Oh! I want you to see,
I Love you more than I Love me!
Oh! I want you to know!
I love you more than words can show!

Oh Mi Amore,
I Love you more
Than the autumn trees with their colored leaves.

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These were intended as lyrics for a song. Critique is accepted!

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  • 12 years ago

    by Alyssa Rianne

    I love this it flows so well!

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Cardwell... this poem is very elegant and just flows like a powerful love song... I love the rhythmic tone.. it really is captivating..

  • 12 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    Beautiful poem Cardwell. The flow was wonderful. It reminded me of poetry from a long time ago because of the flow, and the wording that you used .

    This whole thing is just beautiful
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Mom Pike

    I love your work. Your words flow perfectly, and you are a wonderful poet! You should write a book of poetry and I would be your first buyer!

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Love, love, love. There's nothing as sweet and sore at the same time as love! She is lucky! ;)