Space Suite

by ArtistrySoul   Jun 2, 2012


Light headed,
high frequency of breathing,
motionless treble nerves,
Body develops tears
Loving a pretty girl in doubt

Suspense of solitude in this Space suite . . .

I count down the seconds
next time we meet again,
Paddle in a boat,
I rather travel in my space suite instead
Come closer don't be scared

Space suite restrictions, NOT accepted . . .

Wishing every night I could Hug,
Kiss and Think of you in so many ways
No one will ever understand,
care and appreciate a cute girl like I do
Shy, me too

I orbit the world searching for love
Why no luck?.....as I behold a 4 leaf clover

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  • 11 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Wow, what an interesting poem, I love it! I had no idea what to expect with the title alone, but then you really blew me away because its so unconventional, which is totally refreshing.

    Keep up the good work, your poems are fascinating!

  • 12 years ago

    by Kitty Kurse

    Haha loved the way you mentions luck and a four leaf clover. Im irish so, yeah.

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I think you meant to write the 4 since I thought you wanted to say that you are lucky, rather than not lucky. and that's why you added the question of why not luck? if you supposedly had the clover of 4..

    on the other hand, Fly high's interpretation can also fit the content. lol

    so it's up to you.

    • 12 years ago

      by ArtistrySoul

      Thanks lasting =), yeah i was trying to present the thought of searching for someone in the world and why i haven't had any luck, to the fact that i behold a 3 leaf clover which is unlucky or a 4 leaf clover which is lucky but yet i haven't found that special girl yet....i hope that makes sense lol

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    I love the 3 clover mention at the end , because 4 of them is luck and in this poem you talk about being unlucky.......this piece was a nice piece..s o i loved it...nice work i see real progress in your poetry.l..nice work kal ;)

    • 12 years ago

      by ArtistrySoul

      Thank you =), actually a 4 leaf clover is lucky, 3 isn't anything lol oO

      I think i was meant to mean 4 leaf but i'll go over it and see if i should change it or leave it as it is =)

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