Comments : Ode To Chocolate

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I really like this piece. The descriptions are fantastic and your voice is very clear in a "playful" type of way. Chocolate is amazing, could anyone not like chocolate or this piece? Ooh, now chocolate sounds really good. lol. Thank you for writing this fantastic piece. So simple yet quite unusual and deffinatly a fun read.

    5/5

    ~MRK

    • 12 years ago

      by Michelle Stapp

      Awwww thank you sooo much :) this is the first time I wrote and ode. And I wrote this because I was supposed to to my language art class. Your comment means so much to me :) I appropriate it so much :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    I was going through the funny poems and I saw yours. After I read it, I had to laugh. Chocolate is one of the greatest things ever created :) Where would we be without it?

    You had a good flow and like Speechless Butterfly said, your voice is very clear and playful.

    Excellent job
    5/5

    • 12 years ago

      by Michelle Stapp

      Thank you :) I really appreciate how oh guys like my poem so much :) Ahhhh im just so happy!! Thanks again :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Formidable Muse

    Ah this made me very happy. Chocolate is a gift from God. If only it was healthy...
    5/5

    • 12 years ago

      by Michelle Stapp

      Heehee yeah =) Well Dark chocolate is chocolate, and its better than just milk chocolate =P But milk chocolate taste better =3 Even if its probably only 1% (x