Senses Of A Broken Heart (collab)

by Meme & Naughtymouse   Jun 3, 2012


I can still smell your scent
on the pillow next to me.
Flooding me with memories
of love that used to be.

I can still hear your whispers
every time I close my eyes.
Narcotizing the dreams I have
leaving me with those cries.

I can still feel your touch
the warmth of skin to skin.
But now there's only me
and this hollow feeling within.

I can still taste the bitterness
of silence in your last goodbye.
You never said anything, you
just walked away with a sigh.

I can still see your ghost in every
mirrored reflection of me.
Haunting the moments of my
night, never setting me free.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
By: Meme
And: Naughtymouse
~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Wow, I feel like it's been ages since I've seen a collab!

    Well done with this one guys! The rhyming flowed well and wasn't forced. I love the sadness of the poem, it was awesome.

    Awesome write both of you!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    A very nice rhyme! I have to agree with Lostlove, so little 'poems' rhyme these days being replaced by so called 'free verse', which to me is not a true poem at all, often just a collection of 'written statements' strung together. This one however is a real poem, with all the skill that this rhyme takes to put this together. A sad poem, but a good read.
    Keep writing your great poems that rhyme!
    You're saving real poetry as it should be written.
    Well done!

  • 12 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wow, I really enjoyed this, I loved it, great job, thi blew me away, I really enjoyed the rymthing you used for this content, and you did an outstanding job of expressing your job, I love this, 100/100

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Wow, Two writers that complement each other so well...

    The flow here was so smooth and the rhymes were great too, it was a piece that really flowed as one...

    Great job Meme and Ben...Awesome!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    This is heartbreaking ya Meme and Naughtymouse. The rhymes subtle and well-flowing. That's exactly how I feel these days.

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