"Its my right that tonight, I wash away my sins
without a fight, guided by the light, another story begins."

i really like the ending. it all has a nice flow, good job. 5/5

We all pay for the sins we commit, maybe not now but some day.

good poem, 5/5

Wow this is fantastic
The flow is just breath taking
I dont have to think alot this poem is going to my favorite

5/5 krep writing

I do love the intensity within this poem... the rhythmic and creative rhyme pattern you have chosen was a very nice added touch to this poem... the message is one i can relate too.. when a person is depressed, that is when the mind creates and explosive and over whelming desire to create powerful poetry... this was an awesome piece by you... well done :-)