Dirge Death and Amor

You captured a lot of emotion in just a few lines, nice job.

Love is a game of push and shove, give and take.... it's complicated yet it's something we hunger for. We will put up with all kinds of chaos just because we love that person.

You have a nice, short piece here... I like it a lot. :)

Great job here
I agree with Xanthe that u dont usually write short poems but u did pretty well on this

5/5

I take you don't write short poems that often, but when you do, you write them beautifully.
Great job :)

Nice poem,
I think it's about simmering love that hasn't come out yet?

5/5