Empty life

Good poem 5/5

'i am just living in a black & white life'

^^ That one line alone shows so much emotion and defines the title of the poem.

Fantastic write! 5/5

Thanks also for taking the time to read and comment my poem. (:

Life is black and white until someone comes and colors your world. When you lose it, it becomes dull again. I like the last line, it would be great sometimes if we can go back to the past... but just have to remember there is a reason that person didn't make it to your future. Good write. 5/5

"I am just living in a black & white life."

Life turns to black and white and becomes dull and boring once the one you care for has left.

Its really sad when you lose someone you love, good poem:)