Comments : Empty life

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Its really sad when you lose someone you love, good poem:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    "I am just living in a black & white life."

    Life turns to black and white and becomes dull and boring once the one you care for has left.

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Life is black and white until someone comes and colors your world. When you lose it, it becomes dull again. I like the last line, it would be great sometimes if we can go back to the past... but just have to remember there is a reason that person didn't make it to your future. Good write. 5/5

  • 'i am just living in a black & white life'

    ^^ That one line alone shows so much emotion and defines the title of the poem.

    Fantastic write! 5/5

    Thanks also for taking the time to read and comment my poem. (:

  • 12 years ago

    by Irma Benavides

    Good poem 5/5