It use to be us.

by Illusion   Jun 4, 2012


Why did you take the moon
out of my night?
why did you take the sun
out of my day?
you took everything away
and gave it to him,
it use to be us
now its you and him,
all those cuddles
in the winter,
those beach play
in the summer,
those kisses on your forehead
and your head on my shoulder,
those night calls
till the break of dawn,
those promises
that you'll hold me down.
we use to do it all
but now its you and him.
you both dance to our favourite song
and watch our favourite movies too,
he is a good guy
that one I can't deny,
he's doing it all right
leaving me with no chance,
you look at him with a beautiful smile
just the way you use to look at me,
why do you hate me now
while I love you more than ever,
did I messed up so bad
or my sadness makes you feel better,
without you
everyday is a bad day
while every night is a nightmare,
you've been living next door
and you are out of my reach,
maybe I am rich
but not rich enough to buy you,
you left me clueless
of what it takes to have us again,
I know you are happy now
and that use to be my greatest joy,
its just so sad
that your happiness is my sadness now,
cause it use to be us
but now its you and him....

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  • 12 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    Typos: You have a few in here. For the first and third line, "took" is supposed to be "take". And the sixteenth line where it says "all those promise" it would make more sense if it said "all those promises."

    You have a good poem here. I can understand everything that happened, and I can relate somewhat.

    "he is a good guy
    that one I can't deny,
    he's doing it all right
    leaving me with no chance,"

    ^ It is amazing how you still feel respect for the guy who stole your girl away from you. That means a lot. You are willing to over look the whole situation and still respect him.

    "Why did you took the moon
    out of my night?
    why did you took the sun
    out of my day?
    you took everything away
    and gave it to him,
    it use to be us
    now its you and him,"

    ^At the beginning of this poem, you were sort of blaming the girl for your sadness. However, your sadness transformed-

    "I know you are happy now
    and that use to be my greatest joy,
    its just so sad
    that your happiness is my sadness now,
    cause it use to be us
    but now its you and him...."

    Somewhat into acceptance. Maybe not completely, but it is starting to...I find that interesting and quite...respectful. I think that you felt that the "new guy" wounded your pride yet you still think highly of him.

    Good poem
    4/5

    • 12 years ago

      by Illusion

      I really appreciate ur comment....

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