The Gun.

by Chelsea   Jun 4, 2012


Rose petals decay on the bed we once loved in.
The once open windows dark with cobwebs.
In the kitchen you will find rotting food from what was once supposed to be a romantic dinner.
In the living room the tv has long since lost power where it used to play the sports channel.
In the garage, no one parks anymore.
The flowers by the porch are brown and dead and hold no vibrance.
The children who were supposed to laugh and play are dead and gone.
They never even existed anyway.
The mail box overflows.
Copies of the divorce paperwork that was never signed.
A broken, empty home.
But it can tell you a million stories.
The dark stain splashed across the bathroom tiles.
The splatters of red leading to the bedroom.
Scattered among the decaying rose petals.
Two rings lay clasped together almost desperately amongst the musty bed covers.
And there on the floor lies the gun.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    Very elegantly written. As I kept on reading, I wanted to skip to the end to see what happened. Now I just want to know what happened to the couple-did someone kill them? Was it a murder/suicide? The suspense is killing me...

    Excellent use of suspense
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    The plot thickens as the story unfolds. Very sad but the story keeps the reader glued to the very end.

    Well composed.

    • 12 years ago

      by Chelsea

      Thank you. Your comment is appreciated. ^_^