Comments : The Gun.

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    The plot thickens as the story unfolds. Very sad but the story keeps the reader glued to the very end.

    Well composed.

    • 12 years ago

      by Chelsea

      Thank you. Your comment is appreciated. ^_^

  • 12 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    Very elegantly written. As I kept on reading, I wanted to skip to the end to see what happened. Now I just want to know what happened to the couple-did someone kill them? Was it a murder/suicide? The suspense is killing me...

    Excellent use of suspense
    5/5