The open addiction(music)

by Alanis   Jun 4, 2012


Music is a voice for every soul
It's a heart beat for every lover
It's a drug for every child
It's unsaid compassion for every broken heart
It's the addiction that leads to our every undoing
It's the birth mark for a new beginning
Music is the one place everyone has to go,
The one place where we can lose ourselves
Its the freedom we all need.

Without music we are nothing......

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  • 12 years ago

    by Alanis

    Thank you :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    That's music to my ears chels
    excellent

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    I always enjoy reading other people's ideas, perspective/views on different subject matters and this was not an exception. I like it.
    I like how you expressed your love for/of music. It does bring hope and gives strength.
    A little polishing would make this better:
    Add apostrophes on your 'its' -- it's
    A little typo on 'lose'
    Other than that, this is well-written. Great job, Chelsea (:
    -X

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