I always enjoy reading other people's ideas, perspective/views on different subject matters and this was not an exception. I like it.
I like how you expressed your love for/of music. It does bring hope and gives strength.
A little polishing would make this better:
Add apostrophes on your 'its' -- it's
A little typo on 'lose'
Other than that, this is well-written. Great job, Chelsea (:
-X

That's music to my ears chels
excellent

Thank you :)