Rusty Heart (Cinquain)

by Meme   Jun 4, 2012


Autumn,
rustic and grey
drowns me in a coma
of loneliness until it wraps
my heart.

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© Copyright 2012 by: gIrL
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Cinquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of twenty-two syllables distributed
as 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, in five lines. It was developed by the Imagist poet, Adelaide Crapsey.

Where:-

Line 1: Noun
Line 2: Description of Noun
Line 3: Action
Line 4: Feeling or Effect
Line 5: Synonym of the initial noun.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Oh I don't think I could ever do this form but WOW you've done it so well. Everything flowed and melted into each other, awesome wite!

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  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Oooooooo meme....loving your work!!!! Great imagery!! 5/5