Hushed (Lanturne)

by Meme   Jun 4, 2012


Fears
conquered
this aching
heart, soon it was
hushed.

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© Copyright 2012 by: gIrL
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The Lanturne is a five-line verse shaped like a Japanese lantern with a syllabic pattern of one, two, three, four, one.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    I Really really like this tiny form...interesting, just might have to try :) You have done it very well. 11 total syllables can say so much.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I love this hun! You're doing so well with the formed poetry. I love it!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I like this piece meme :-) interesting way of writing....i think ill have a play myself ;-) big loves x

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