Comments : Hushed (Lanturne)

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I like this piece meme :-) interesting way of writing....i think ill have a play myself ;-) big loves x

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I love this hun! You're doing so well with the formed poetry. I love it!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    I Really really like this tiny form...interesting, just might have to try :) You have done it very well. 11 total syllables can say so much.