by Kate
Mmm... this is good. I like how you include the monster or "death" and make it seem like an actual thing... nice personifiction and imagery. The fact that you're "seeing" this demon is also a good way to play into the insanity thing, nice. Deep, dark, twisted and soo good. It is easy to relate |
^^ thank you. I was having one of my twisted moments and myfriend and myself where talking and I had said all of this...So, yeah |