You Changed My Life

by Yrem Crish   Jun 5, 2012


I used to walk alone
Along the pathway of life;
nowhere to go and
darkness shadows the light.

I used to live in life
that hope was buried;
dreams were frazzled
like a dust
scattered in the wind.

I used to ruin the world
where my soul was only left alive;
my heart rusted with hatred and
my blood caroused with hopeless wine.

I used to think that
tomorrow was shredded forever;
the time was faded on my palm and
no more sun to shines
nor moon to light
...Until you came, my friend
and changed my life...

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  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This is brilliantly penned. I love your metaphors, very crisp. The message behind this is an experience one goes in life. A journey of friendship can be sweet and bitterly sour. It all depends on the friend involved. We meet a stranger during childhood or when grown and instantly, a deep bond is rooted. Some friendship, stay till eternity and such are planted from beyond. One connects so well like a family with such encountered. And on the other side, we unfortunately get mingled with dishonest ones too. Whom pretend to be whom they're not, hence, winning your trust and betraying ones loyalty at the end. So friends come and go always, very few are pure and real gems. When we meet such, we hold on to part no more. An awesome piece. Attractive to the mind and holds a show of gratitude; how a miserable and aimless life found a purpose to be happy, through a friend. *Claps* :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by ArtistrySoul

    I agree, this was a great write :)

    Sometimes we are always aware that someone who comes along can change your life in an instant, even tho you already have friends previously..etc It just shows that you may have friends you known for a long time but there's always someone that comes into your life unexpected and makes you feel amazing about yourself, cares for you a lot, is always there no matter what to listen and some how you intend to have more fun with that person than anyone else.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    A great poem.... great words used and a good imagery put up... ur friend is lucky to have u and so do u^^
    Good work

  • 12 years ago

    by Joy Helberg

    Lovely poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Wow, i dont know you had written such a wonderful piece about me..lol..Everything about this is amazing.

    • 12 years ago

      by Yrem Crish

      About you? Haha...you make me laugh ,Paul. Anyway, thanks for the comment. I really appreciate it:))