Crishmerl(Acrostic)

by Yrem Crish   Jun 5, 2012


Clone of a girl in the mirror
revive my strengths from her hopes; and-
invigorate my dreams that once melted.
She is my shield and my precious model; who-
holds my hand to stand,
made me brave to fight; and-
engaged me in positive outlook of life a
real damsel facing the mirror; and-
learnt how to wear a perfect Crishmerl smile.

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It's about my positive side as a person:))

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  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Very good indeed. I love the acrostic form, anyway - it's always interesting to see where people will go with it.

  • 9 years ago

    by Z

    This is such a beautiful poem. When we look in the mirror, we always see someone that we don't want to see at all. It's interesting to see this from the positive point of view we can be happy but a lot of times it is tough. I liked the imagery in this poem and like how you centered it around a person and mirror very thought provoking piece!

    • 9 years ago

      by Yrem Crish

      Thanks for the comment friend.
      I really appreciate it.
      :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Very nice mery... You are more like me... always finding something good out of the worst... :)
    This poem brings out that side of u...
    an energy booster and good work:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Kylead

    Its good prefer some of your longer ones better but still great

  • 12 years ago

    by Kylead

    Its good prefer some of your longer ones better but still great

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