Mery~
Great to see you writing again :)
This is a beautiful piece! I've only written an acrostic about my name once and it was quite negative lol.
I love and admire your optimism.
The word choice was lovely and just fitting.

'Clone of a girl in the mirror
revive my strengths from her hopes; and-
invigorate my dreams that once melted.'
^I like how you penned 'clone', it adds a nice atmosphere here. The idea of finding strength in yourself is brilliant.

'She is my shield and my precious model;
who-
hold my hand to stand,
made me brave to fight; and-'
^I like that you continued on with the theme instead of abandoning it.
A little error on tense: hold should be holds :)

'engage me in positive outlook of life a
real damsel facing in the mirror; and-
learned how to wear a perfect Crishmerl
smile.'
^Lovely ending. Very hopeful; very positive. I like it.
Engage should be engaged. Add 'a' before positive. I advice you to remove 'in' before 'the mirror' to make it flow better. Learned should be learnt.

Beautiful piece. Keep writing!
-X

It's really great to see someone post a positive poem about themselves... i love it! :) great imagery and keep being positive! 5/5

Excellent

Mery
Great to see writing agaon after so long =)
and you blow me with this poem simpley fantastic

"Clone of a girl in the mirror
revive my strengths from her hopes; and-
invigorate my dreams that once melted.
She is my shield and my precious model; who-
hold my hand to stand,
made me brave to fight; and-"
Liked the usage of 'clone' gave something special like your reflection in the mirror is,alive and can move on its oen and just like you in look ,
I can imagin you standing in front of a mirror talking to your 'clone' and she encourage you to kerp going and complete your way and makes you stronger

Completely amazing come back Mery

5/5 keep writing =)

Excellent, very nicely written.

It's so so so nice......filled with positive vibes!!
thank u for the optimistic poem!!!

The ending... Good on ya. :)

Its good prefer some of your longer ones better but still great

Its good prefer some of your longer ones better but still great

Very nice mery... You are more like me... always finding something good out of the worst... :)
This poem brings out that side of u...
an energy booster and good work:)

This is such a beautiful poem. When we look in the mirror, we always see someone that we don't want to see at all. It's interesting to see this from the positive point of view we can be happy but a lot of times it is tough. I liked the imagery in this poem and like how you centered it around a person and mirror very thought provoking piece!

Very good indeed. I love the acrostic form, anyway - it's always interesting to see where people will go with it.