Loved it, as I do all your poems, keep them coming =) 5 all the way

Aww Hayley. I'm sorry that you feel this way. I hope you feel much better soon though. You did a great job in writing this piece. Extremely heartfelt and very meaningful. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece. I know it's a sad poem but hey, I appreciate your earnest effort.
Take care always and all the best.
Kristina

I wished that your dream wouldve come true this time, but there will be other times too. I love ya Hayley, and I miss you too. Love, Tim

Hi Hayley, sorry for not commenting so often anymore but I'm always on here. This is a lovely poem but until I read YikYak's comment above I didn't realise how bad you were feeling. I know I only talk in the 'conversation' thread to you, as rare as that is, but I hope you know I dont like to hear about you being depressed. Like Yik above, I hope things work out better for you. It really was a lovely poem to read even if it had a sad undertone. Well done H, K

Hayley, you already know i love your poems, but i especially love this one cause i can relate to it a lot. so i gave you a 5 of course!!!! kepp the great poems comin!!! ~Luv Always, Manda

wow. just wow. i'm still getting over this cause it seems to have touched me so.
wow