Honey Love (Parallelogram de Crystalline).

by Steven Beesley   Jun 6, 2012


Your brown eyes
sparkle like tiny stars
They shimmer and twinkle so brightly

Your beauty
mesmerizes me so
like colorful wild flowers in bloom

Your kisses
so sweet upon my lips
like the nectar of golden honey

Your fair skin
like petals of a rose
so smooth like fine velvet to my touch

Parallelogram de Crystalline is a poetry form created by Karan Naidu

This form consists of 4 verses 3 line in each verse. The syllable count for each stanza is 3,6,9. In this style of poem the beauty of a lover is compared with the nature and described...

6th June, 2012 (c)

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  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    To compare a lover with nature is not an easy task...I often find myself lost trying to do this form but you have done it and done it so beautifully!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    You did an excellent job with the Parallelogram de Crystalline in my opinion, Steven. It is very beautiful on how you compared the beauty of a lover and nature. I don't really have anything to say because it is so beautiful :)

    You used the perfect similes for each one

    Excellent
    5/5

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