by Purple Rose
Typos: I did not find any actual typos, but one of the sentences/lines did bother me. The line that says "why your dustpin invited my love?" is that supposed to be "was your dustpan invited my love?" or something like that? Because the way you have it doesn't really make sense to me. Just trying to help :) It is your poem... |
Purple Rose said everything I was going to, lol. Anyway, keep your head up! It will get better. |