This part is a little long without a pause,
Continually wondering
if she feels like unwanted aftermath
of an intoxicating soul.

There is also the it's issue, (in this case it is its.)
Is this about a ghost? Or are you dreaming, there are some lines in this again,
luxurious silhouette, (I like this, really makes you think what could make a silhouette luxurious?)
sadness trying to sell you a smoke, this works really well.
Just read again and I think I have the finally line sussed, is this a ghost of somebody seeking their true love? Or am I off the mark again....!!!
Great read

Thanks