Amazing...wonderful...beautiful, this is just sooooo heartfelt....*jumping up and down* meeeemeeee!!!! Love it :-)

Meme- everything about this piece was perfect. I loved the image of migrating birds and the whole idea of the connection between your blue sky and his, joining, then.

A beautiful lovely piece, what a wonderful form to write in it, enjoyed this a bunch :]

Take care
MaryAnne

I think the poem fits so well with the background! Oh this is beautiful, you've done so well with this form. I love it.

I think it's great that you are doing heaps of formed poetry. You're awesome at it.

x

Memeee!

So enjoyable. Definitely I am going to try this form. Short and has a rhythm.

Me too! Loved the migrating birds image, made me think of a song by Fairuz. Just awesome.

I think you are a good writer..nice poem

Absolutely splendid!

Perfect execution and content. The center justification dovetails beautifully with the concept of birds in flight [pun intended]. The imagery is both colorful and graphically direct (pink kisses, be-ribboned box, migratory birds, blue skies).
You are turning into one of the site experts on formed poetry. You may be in need of a challenge (hmmmm.)

Thanks to you and your formed poetry contest I fall in love with formed poetry. So I have you to thank for every new poem I write.

A challeng? Sure thing, I up to it :)

I, too, need a challenge. Toss me one. Or two. Or three. I don't know. Pleeease!