This poem is good. My only suggestion would be on the second line turn hated into hatred and the third line turn hate into disgust. Repition isn't always a good thing. But the poem is still good and I can relate to where you are coming from. I'm looking forward to reading more. Keep up the great work. Just maybe work on wording a bit more. But still love it. 5.5

Yeah that's whats up I'll keep that in mind thanks, I'll try something new.