Comments : Holding on fire

  • 12 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I liked the story of this poem, how you described someone lost and lonely and in a very sad state but then they met someone that became special to them and filled their life with happiness, I thought the story was good b/c it took a turn near the end, it was an unusal love poem but it gets your point across and conveys the emotion well. Nice write here! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by White Orchid

    Unusual I meant to type not unusal. *.

  • 12 years ago

    by mo3taz

    Thanks White Orchid, i tried to write this poem by stages; i wrote it on stages in each stage my feelings were different.