by White Orchid
I liked the story of this poem, how you described someone lost and lonely and in a very sad state but then they met someone that became special to them and filled their life with happiness, I thought the story was good b/c it took a turn near the end, it was an unusal love poem but it gets your point across and conveys the emotion well. Nice write here! 5/5 |
by White Orchid
Unusual I meant to type not unusal. *. |
by mo3taz
Thanks White Orchid, i tried to write this poem by stages; i wrote it on stages in each stage my feelings were different. |