Awaken

by Ray Blue   Jun 7, 2012


Awaken

Yesterday was a dream
To freeze the ticking time
And learned to fathom
She wore no make up
As she walked into the crowd
Those stuck up eyes,
Seemed miles away
In picture perfect
Recall your safe haven

Into the vanilla sky
We say, You lived only once
Since its been how long?
Got deeply mesmerized,
Got drowned out
Blinded to daily sandstorms
Like an oleander in the wind
You were, and I'm a mannequin
A calm sound so hypnotizing

Today's thought of the day
Inhaling in the absent of real air
But never impede to say grace
Feel the sunrise at 5 AM
Just breathe more
Can't deny knowing yourself
Flowing between coincedence
And consequences she neglected
Find your safe haven

Its a deja vu world
Written in an unending loop
Even to our own walls closing in
That encrypted within our hearts
Chosen to live
To those tranquilized moments
Seemed always
All she loved
In a goodnight's kiss

Seemed always
Happened all
At once in your life
That inhibited a fool'smind
All nothing but hope,
To treasure and your loveones
Like a sting of inner truth
In her life, she'd chosen
To save from the internal turmoil

Not unusual for herself
To the answers she found
Long before she'd fallen
Its now time to awaken
To your journey in this universe
Its time to awaken,
Infinity of you is deep inside
Healing herself
Into a new door to open.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Today's thought of the day
    Inhaling in the absent of real air
    But never impede to say grace
    Feel the sunrise at 5 AM
    Just breathe more
    Can't deny knowing yourself
    Flowing between coincedence
    And consequences she neglected
    Find your safe haven

    ^As I re-read this I felt that the author is telling the reader/person to wake up to reality
    and be involved in every moment...not to miss out!

    Its a deja vu world
    Written in an unending loop
    Even to our own walls closing in
    That encrypted within our hearts
    Chosen to live
    To those tranquilized moments
    Seemed always
    All she loved
    In a goodnight's kiss

    ^We all like to live within our dreams even in
    the daytime. For that is where we are safe and
    we have what we want; but we can't always live within a dream...liked this stanza.

    A deep write filled with many thoughts for the reader to ponder..take care :)

  • 12 years ago

    by mandy

    Wow. Absolutely beautiful, I'm actually over here racking my brain trying to express how this poem made me feel. The words, emotion... 5/5

    p.s. I'm so glad you're posting again!

    mandy :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Such vivid details and imagery almost makes me see everything before me.

    Very well written indeed.

    Nice read to start off my day!

    • 12 years ago

      by Ray Blue

      Steven,
      You might be trap in Deja Vu if you start your day with this:) Have a great day!

      Thanks,
      Ray

  • 12 years ago

    by Sylvia

    This took my breath away as I read and there are so many thoughts in my mind that I could never get them all out here. That in mind, I will just say, very well done Ray.

    • 12 years ago

      by Ray Blue

      Thank you, Sylvia:)
      So glad you like it.
      I used some psychological words to it,
      Its a poem therapy for depression.

      Have a great day!

      Cheers,
      Ray

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