This took my breath away as I read and there are so many thoughts in my mind that I could never get them all out here. That in mind, I will just say, very well done Ray.

Such vivid details and imagery almost makes me see everything before me.

Very well written indeed.

Nice read to start off my day!

Wow. Absolutely beautiful, I'm actually over here racking my brain trying to express how this poem made me feel. The words, emotion... 5/5

p.s. I'm so glad you're posting again!

mandy :)

Today's thought of the day
Inhaling in the absent of real air
But never impede to say grace
Feel the sunrise at 5 AM
Just breathe more
Can't deny knowing yourself
Flowing between coincedence
And consequences she neglected
Find your safe haven

^As I re-read this I felt that the author is telling the reader/person to wake up to reality
and be involved in every moment...not to miss out!

Its a deja vu world
Written in an unending loop
Even to our own walls closing in
That encrypted within our hearts
Chosen to live
To those tranquilized moments
Seemed always
All she loved
In a goodnight's kiss

^We all like to live within our dreams even in
the daytime. For that is where we are safe and
we have what we want; but we can't always live within a dream...liked this stanza.

A deep write filled with many thoughts for the reader to ponder..take care :)