by The Poet Behind The Poems Jun 7, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
One second without you |
by average thoughts
U r so rite, one sec is enough to let us knw.. |
by Tara Kay
I don't want to be too critical about your piece but there are a few issues that just didn't help with the flow or sight of the piece such as the capital letters where they weren't needed and the occasional lower case such as "i" when it should be "I" and just the wording and lack of punctuation really. |
by Jenni
One second without you |