Sometimes silence says what we can't explain.
A little typo on 'disappear'.
Awesome write. Keep writing :)
-X

Beautiful piece my friend.

Very nice piece. You really capture what goes through a persons mind when burning old pictures of a loved one.

As Xanthe mentioned there are some little mistakes which make the poem sounds a little awkward sometimes.
Other than that it is really good.

5/5

I love the sadness in this piece, the heartbreak of losing someone is evident. The way you have setout this poem is wonderful, at first slow so everything sinks in and then in the end, it became faster as if the mourning became part of you and letting go became easier.

x

Thanx guys fr the sweet wordings