Bleeding pen of a poet.( inspired by all poets n poetess)

by DarkLight   Jun 7, 2012


Moved by my own feelings,
I let my heart explore the nature and the beauty of this newly born planet.
Planet love,
sets the mood,
a place to kill my loneliness.
I watch as the pen bleed blue on a piece of paper.
reading every thought of mine.
Bitter and sweet,
I can' t control it.
The flow is beautiful,
am getting tempted to ask but no one to.
Nature itself can' t explain my own feelings
So I let the bleeding pen do the art.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    Very nice way of describing the writing proces of your poems. The pen bleedS blue on the paper really did it for me.

    But as showed in my remark there are some minor grammatical mistakes.
    But overall it is a really good piece

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Like everyone else said the last two lines are beautiful... a wonderful write! :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is amazing, especially the part
    of this bleeding pen do the art
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Thanx all..

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    The pen is mightier then the sword, the written word in any language has long been the source of so much inspiration, love, anger, rage etc.

    Beautifully penned.

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