Comments : Flightless with wings

  • 12 years ago

    by Chima

    Pin point accuracy that thought of nature of always please me i like the poetic devices

    • 12 years ago

      by neon sunset

      Thank you for the comment. ^.^

  • 12 years ago

    by Chima

    Pin point accuracy that thought of nature of always please me i like the poetic devices

  • 12 years ago

    by yogi73

    I love this poem. it is going on my favs. The sorrow in the poem is touching and identifiable. You have masterfully placed a sky of merry blue into a well written prose of meloncholy overtones. thanks for sharing

  • 4 years ago

    by yogi73

    Love the 'merry' start and lightness of the poem. Love the imagery of rolling waves. The sorrowful ending adds to the depth of the poem for a moment of self reflection