Love is a treasure filled with diamonds of promisses

by Ole Carsten   Jun 8, 2012


Love is filled with memorable moments,
our love is indeed no exception from that.
When I close my eyes I see your smile,
even if it is only a blink of an eye.

There is a lot of sadness in our love,
because there are much to lose.
Love is not granted for anyone,
I know it feel so for everyone.

I feel dizzy some days when we are apart,
not knowing when or how we meet again.
Love lives in the soul and mind,
I feel lucky that where you are to find.

Love can overcome mountains and seas,
I know how to go the extra many miles.
Love is about passion in life,
this stuff that makes a good wife.

I know inside me there is a good husband,
My soul heart and mind is set for that.
Love is filling me to the edge of dreams.
I promised you to stand a watch the moonbeams.

Maybe I am crazy, just a bit,
When the clouds lifted I saw a smile.
Your love is mine you said,
I know that, but wish to be in your bed.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    Very elegant way of talking about love with a lot of truth woven into it.

    1 remark I have is the grammatical errors:

    our love are indeed no exception from that. (are should be is)

    Other than that it is a great piece.

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Amazing write! I love to write on this subject (dont we all) but you go that extra mile, hit me deep this one eh?

    I loved your title too pulled me straight and had to read it :-)

    Great job :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    You have such a unique way of talking
    about love, that will make a readers heart melt.

  • 12 years ago

    by Odin Ebbesen

    Strong poem about your favorite topic, love and emotions

    this sounds serious, something going on?

    Love is about passion in life,
    this stuff that makes a good wife.

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