Typos: in the twelfth stanza where it says "And her minds wraps itself..." I believe "minds" is supposed to be "mind." It would make more sense that way... but it is your poem. Just giving my opinion :)

I ache for the girl, whoever she is. Whether she be you, or someone that you know. I get the feeling that her dad probably has a job or something that caused him to leave and he hasn't come back until now. Or maybe he just got up one day and left - either one is possible :(

"how she feels like
a broken disappointment."

^ Here the reader can tell that she doesn't feel like she is loved, or respected enough. She probably feels that everything she does isn't good enough for her family - she could never please them, especially her dad.

"Does he even know
she's attempted to leave
the world,
that his bright baby girl
was breathing on thoughts
of suicide?"

^ I don't know if I am on the right track here, but this is what I think. This is how I understand your poem. In this stanza, the girl went through so much pain because she felt abandoned by her dad. She was contemplating suicide because she thought that no one loved her. She probably couldn't get anyone to understand either, or she felt like no one understood.

"And if she could truly speak
the truth, instead of his odious
memories belting their way out,
she'd say,
we've been fine without you, dad,
and I sometimes wish you would
have called me first,
to let me know that things haven't
changed.
But they have, God knows they have."

^ I don't really know what is going on in this poem. I know that the girl does not want her father to come back home. However, I don't understand what has changed. That is what is confusing me. Maybe she has changed? That is a possibility. I have no idea.

This is a very sad, heartbreaking poem. It is about a girl who has been wounded by her father because he has not been in her life enough. It sucks big time :( I'm sorry to whomever had to go through such a thing because being betrayed by a loved one, or abandoned, is the worst imaginable pain anyone can ever feel...

Excellent
5/5

I have two daughters, one 8 one 6, reading this is difficult.
(My wife says I am too soft on them, But it's better than hearing "we've been fine without you Dad"
Anyway onto the poem...
You definitely have a way with your descriptive narrative, "Mind wraps itself in foil"
And
Or are we all
stuck in cocoons of our
own bewilderment?

This is the Jump out piece is this.
Odious memories is true, lose touch, try and get back in, you can only really speak about good and tend to try and ignore anything that may have been bad.
Interesting how she blames herself, could she have done better, is it her fault?
Yet you show clearly it wasn't.
You have a talent for portraying emotion on the page. (or screen!!)
It flows very well, even the odd double line in the middle of longer stanzas work because they give you time to reflect, it's like afterthoughts or sub thoughts as you read along.