Comments : Hide And Seek

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Locking me behind the doors of my dreams
    and leaving me with no keys to break loose.
    You know its the only place where you can
    be around me when you have no other excuse.

    u knw this was me ,,,but somehow i managed to escape..

    u made me cry ,,,
    pain of evry broken hrt

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Beautifully penned piece.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Hey beautiful lady!

    This poem is completely dark. I felt like I was trapped as well while reading it. The words you've used, the tone, the rhyming, everything fits perfectly.

    I mean I only read the first two lines and was already captivated, because I knew how you felt. I've had those times where I felt like something or someone was invading my mind.

    Awesome write hun!!!

    x