by Marvellous
..pretty grand! Good job. |
by Marvellous
..pretty grand! Good job. |
by Marvellous
..pretty grand! Good job. |
by BlueJay
Summer Days |
This is really refreshing... it reminds me of carefree summers of just lounging out, swimming, cookouts, all that good stuff... before life set in and work took over my life hahaha. anyway, nature poems always give me a wonderful serene feeling that makes me feel warm inside...especially yours since its theme is summer! can just feel those sun rays glowin across my skin, lovw it! |
The first stanza made me smile I can't help it but whenever I see the imagery in my head I just smile especially if it has children in it since I want to be a mother o so badly and I can just imagine this the children playing in the playground with their hair flowing and them laughing o what joy ( not a pedifile I just want to have children one day!) I enjoyed the first stanza the most it's my favorite and will always be my favorite in this poem I love it and I love that the rest of the poem flows but after the first stanza I think you went more into another thing just a little since you mentioned children but I guess it was just about the nature if that is the case then congratulations you made a wonderful poem! 5/5 |