What Do You Do?

by Angel   Jun 8, 2012


What do you do when everything you love is being taken away?
What do you do when there's nothing left to say?

What do you do when you're falling apart?
What do you do when you have a broken heart?

What do you do when you don't fit in?
What do you do when you're dying within?

What do you do when your smile is a lie?
What do you do when you're hurting inside?

What do you do when you want to bleed?
What do you do when not a warning you will heed?

What do you do when you're done with this world?
What do you do when you're just a broken girl?...

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  • 12 years ago

    by Jhierren Paz

    This would be great one, ;p

  • 12 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    I really really loved ur poem..it so much resembles my situation..n m pretending to be okay..just trying n trying to do adjust myself..*_*
    Keep up high spirits..n keep writing..i vote u 5/5.

  • 12 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Oh my goodness, i loved it, one of my favorites, fantasic!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Well composed questions that i felt really connected with the readers in that they would put themselves in your shoes. All i can suggest is question marks since they are questions.

    • 12 years ago

      by Angel

      Thanks paul i'll fix that right away :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Kelwin lost in thought

    I'd be myself and I love this poem. It's so me

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