Comments : 4000 Miles (collab)

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I love this piece and i love writing with you Meme :-)

    Epic as always :-))

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    I think we should publish a book together, lol :P

    You make it so easy for poeple to collab with you, thats why I enjoy writing with you as well :)

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Still it seems that the universe had its
    own way, to keep our paths so far apart.
    But as long as we breathe the same air,
    those heartbeats will never fail to start.

    You will always have me near you despite,
    the distances we may forever possess.
    Always holding a light in case you find
    yourself wandering alone in the darkness.

    these two stanzas r like wow...grt job

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I read this collaboration from you two last night... and my heart melted... so I read it again this morning and im still melting... What a beautiful collab from the two of you! The flow and message just tied in together so perfectly.. Very nice!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I read this collaboration from you two last night... and my heart melted... so I read it again this morning and im still melting... What a beautiful collab from the two of you! The flow and message just tied in together so perfectly.. Very nice!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    This is a great collab. Nice piece and congrats for making this piece together with naughtymouse:))
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    This is a great collab. Nice piece and congrats for making this piece together with naughtymouse:))
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I found this one as a motivation piece, someone who is there with you no matter the distance.
    I felt the support and also I like the lines where it says something about speaking the truth and whatever you say it's what it means.