Wow, this is a really good poem. I am surprised that no one has noticed it before now. I am sorry to say this, but I am not your friend that you are talking about, nor do I know her... :D I thought I would just clear that up, even though you did render a smile from me :]

Anyway, I don't really see anything wrong with this poem. It is a beautiful one. I like how you included the reader by asking questions - it gave it a very realistic type of feeling. Made me feel like I was almost there with you while you were telling the story.

Excellent
5/5

What a lovely poem; such lovely thoughts, emotions. I really love it.
"I met a friend - someone who
Made me smile; someone who
I could render a smile.
On that cold, cold winter's day,
She laughed at my lame jokes,
Upon that moment in time,
I felt my clumsy speech admired."
^wonderful lines, perhaps, my favourite. These lines very well describes a True friend-someone whom everyone deserves. That's what a friend does. This poem surely goes to my favourite.:-)
Good.
Keep it up.
5/5.
~Shruti S.