Intimacy

by Melissa   Jun 9, 2012


Some days I find it so easy
to get carried away by you,
to just flutter like a leaf
and fall wherever you are

but I cannot drift myself into your arms
and embrace you completely,
so I nuzzle up to the notion
of your hug instead

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  • 12 years ago

    by Chima

    Cool piece it was written with such simplicity but wit every word bearing offsprings. i really like the world "nuzzle" sounded like a verse in finnegans wake120:12-14 "sentenced to be nuzzled over a full trillion times for ever and a night till his noodle sink or swim by that ideal reader suffering from an ideal isomnia" NiX ONE

  • 12 years ago

    by Chima

    Cool piece it was written with such simplicity but wit every word bearing offsprings. i really like the world "nuzzle" sounded like a verse in finnegans wake120:12-14 "sentenced to be nuzzled over a full trillion times for ever and a night till his noodle sink or swim by that ideal reader suffering from an ideal isomnia" NiX ONE

  • 12 years ago

    by Chima

    Cool piece it was written with such simplicity but wit every word bearing offsprings. i really like the world "nuzzle" sounded like a verse in finnegans wake120:12-14 "sentenced to be nuzzled over a full trillion times for ever and a night till his noodle sink or swim by that ideal reader suffering from an ideal isomnia" NiX ONE

  • 12 years ago

    by The Prince

    Melissa! I love your work! So much! I could easily get addicted ;) this is so simple, mel, and it works for you here. Simple layout, gorgeous execution; almost childlike innocence exudes from this. Keep writing. You're a star!

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