Comments : Intimacy

  • 12 years ago

    by The Prince

    Melissa! I love your work! So much! I could easily get addicted ;) this is so simple, mel, and it works for you here. Simple layout, gorgeous execution; almost childlike innocence exudes from this. Keep writing. You're a star!

  • 12 years ago

    by Chima

    Cool piece it was written with such simplicity but wit every word bearing offsprings. i really like the world "nuzzle" sounded like a verse in finnegans wake120:12-14 "sentenced to be nuzzled over a full trillion times for ever and a night till his noodle sink or swim by that ideal reader suffering from an ideal isomnia" NiX ONE

  • 12 years ago

    by Chima

    Cool piece it was written with such simplicity but wit every word bearing offsprings. i really like the world "nuzzle" sounded like a verse in finnegans wake120:12-14 "sentenced to be nuzzled over a full trillion times for ever and a night till his noodle sink or swim by that ideal reader suffering from an ideal isomnia" NiX ONE

  • 12 years ago

    by Chima

    Cool piece it was written with such simplicity but wit every word bearing offsprings. i really like the world "nuzzle" sounded like a verse in finnegans wake120:12-14 "sentenced to be nuzzled over a full trillion times for ever and a night till his noodle sink or swim by that ideal reader suffering from an ideal isomnia" NiX ONE