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by Ole Carsten   Jun 9, 2012


I'm always in a smile thinking of you,
Love is a symbol of faith.
Kissing you I have to do,
even it is late oh please wait.

My daily poem is a bit late today,
used much time on scribbling a lot.
I was thinking how I could stay,
Thinking about staying makes me hot.

Now I have turned cold again,
love images as symbols of two hearts.
On my chest there dripping some stain,
I'm looking forward to the day of no departures.

Then there will be a day,
the day that I won't hate.
I'm longing for these words, to stay
This is my loves true faith.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    "I'm always in a smile thinking of you
    Love is a symbol of fait
    Kissing you I have to do
    It is late o please wait"

    ^fait should be "fate"
    o should be "oh"

    "My poem is a bit late to day
    Used much time on scribing a lot
    I was thinking how I could stay
    Once I was a bit hot"

    ^ to day should be "today"
    scribing should be "scribbling"

    "Then there is a day
    then there is a day I don't hate
    I just wanted to stay
    This is my true fait"

    ^once again fait should be "fate"

    Honestly, I'm confused a little by this poem. It doesn't seem like it's got a clear message. Maybe some revision and some punctuation would help.

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