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by Hannah Lizette
"I'm always in a smile thinking of you Love is a symbol of fait Kissing you I have to do It is late o please wait" ^fait should be "fate" o should be "oh" "My poem is a bit late to day Used much time on scribing a lot I was thinking how I could stay Once I was a bit hot" ^ to day should be "today" scribing should be "scribbling" "Then there is a day then there is a day I don't hate I just wanted to stay This is my true fait" ^once again fait should be "fate" Honestly, I'm confused a little by this poem. It doesn't seem like it's got a clear message. Maybe some revision and some punctuation would help.