Unphotographable

by Meme   Jun 9, 2012


I tried to capture the sunset
in those unpredictable eyes.
A mystery that kept me gazing
to understand their disguise.

They spoke ballads of lines
in a language of perfect silence.
In moments I had to look away
from their thunderous ambiance.

Every nictation from his eyes
opened a new chapter in mine.
And in his I read the colors of
coffee bean with a drop of sunshine.

Every glimpse held a million story
but they were never photographable.
And in my mind I had an album of him
that I called -My Unforgettable.

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© Copyright 2012 by: gIrL
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  • 12 years ago

    by CryingHeart

    It was crisp dear, a whole in itself i am not much of a admirer but this one is going into my favorite 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    This was a very pleasant read :)
    the un-framable description is penned well and rhymed nicely. 5*

  • 12 years ago

    by Boy

    I love this piece. touched my heart.

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Meme,

    I have always admired your work, this touch of simplicity and sadness you have behind the words of every piece is unbelievable. This time, I wasn't surprised, I already knew (from the title) that I am going to love each bit. Your poetry has some innocence to it, especially that one bout a childhood memory. It was epic. I know I haven't commented on it yet, I will I promise. ;)

    I love everything bout this piece, starting from the title till the rhymes and the atmosphere it had. The only thing I had a problem with was the ending, the way you wrote 'my unforgettable' between apostrophes and capitalised the 'm' and 'c' seemed not professional at all. That being said, it was my only critique and your poem is emotional, moving and melodic. Good job!

    • 12 years ago

      by Meme

      Thank you so much for your honest opinion .. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Meme hun, you're amazing. This poem was awesome and the rhyming was sooooooooooo good because everything flowed well. I enjoyed this read. I love the idea of being unphotographable. For me I hate taking photos. I love the images in this write hun

    x

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