Comments : What can I do now?

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I can see the hurt and pain, not to
    mention the frustration.
    No matter how hard we try to defend ourselves, by being honest
    people hear what they want to hear
    well penned 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Trust is key, somewhere down the line the trust has been broken it seems, so maybe that's why it's so hard for them to believe you? but sometimes other people blow things out of proportion and believe others when the truth is sitting right in front of them... so hopefully things work out. I really like the last two lines about the cat, so true. overall, nice piece. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    It's hard when people tell the truth and nobody wants to believe them.
    Some people just don't want to believe you.
    I hope things are better now for you :(

    Good poem

    5/5