I hope you are doing ok.

I like the rhymes in your poem, and I could sense a lost person within your piece.

You should make this into a song, because it is what it reminds me of.

Typos: In the sixth stanza, there is an 'i' that needs capitalized.

From what I understand, you are worried about being forgotten. All of us are worried about this one time or another.

I like the flow that you have here. It is very compelling, and very beautiful in my opinion. Your rhymes are very good. It seems that you wrote this when you were in depressed state, and for that reason I would have put it in the sadness part of PnQ, but maybe it wasn't that sad to you when you wrote it? I have no idea.

Excellent
5/5