Veil of Secrecy

Loved this write hun, love the choice of words, the images as well. I read over it a couple of times to take things in, a different piece from you but awesome just the same.

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This has a dark mysterious feeling to it. I like how it reads, and I like the feeling it leaves you with.

You have chosen a perfect title for this poem as it already directs your thoughts to a certain path that the poem then continues to carries through its verses.

Pearled iridescence
shadows the corner
of a dark secret.
^^
this openning was my favorite part. Only true artists can draw a mystic picture with their words; and you hon are an unbelievale one :)

You penned it.

Another aswesome piece by you, I also love the flow:)
Perfectly written:)

Andrea, I just love the title and the whole poem.
It has that tone of not being understood, that obscurity and vagueness to leave the reader in thought.

The flow was smooth and captivating and I felt the sense of darkness here...

Great write.
xxxxx